Mother, I'm home
I am delighted beyond measure to have discovered The Economist style guide online. In its printed form, this has been Mr P's favourite resource for at least the last eight years or so, since he was employed to write for them, so it's particularly satisfying to finally have access to it myself. What I love about these style guides is not so much the house rules they lay down - I'm not desperate to write in Economist fashion - but the opportunity they provide for digging out what's really useful and glossing over what isn't. For instance, I've no intention of following this one:
Note that only The Economist has The italicised. Thus the Daily Telegraph, the New York Times, the Observer, the Spectator (but Le Monde, Die Welt, Die Zeit)Really, I feel no need to give the Economist any special italicised treatment, though of course you would understand why the magazine itself would want to.
There is a lot to digest in here so I may have to come back to it another time - you have been warned (a misuse of the hyphen in itself). In the meantime, to get started, there are unnecessary words to consider.
I hold my hand up to numerous sins in this area, with a tendency to get over-excited and then rather verbose. I am particularly pleased to note it picks up on a bête-noire of mine, the phrase "to meet with", which is not only a cursed Americanism but a tautology. If nothing else it should make us think about what we're writing and judge the usefulness of every word:
In general, be concise. Try to be economical in your account or argument ("The best way to be boring is to leave nothing out"—Voltaire). Similarly, try to be economical with words. "As a general rule, run your pen through every other word you have written; you have no idea what vigour it will give to your style." (Sydney Smith) Raymond Mortimer put it even more crisply when commenting about Susan Sontag: "Her journalism, like a diamond, will sparkle more if it is cut."There's some scary advice in there - such economy from The Economist - but it's something to argue about at the

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I do strive for economy in any formal writing - very necessary when you're given only 400 words to deconstruct the European Monetary System. But in emails, and on forums and blog comments like this, I'm striving to create a conversational tone. A few unnecessary words make all the difference then.
I have often noticed how many more words the Irish use in conversation compared to the English, and what a warm welcoming impression it creates. " Well, a very good morning to you indeed, and isn't it just the loveliest day now" might be a bit of a parody but it's not that far from the truth. Compare that to the curt "Morning" you might be lucky to get in London.
That's very true - I am always mindful that people don't want to read reams and reams of wittering on my actual blog posts, so I'm trying to be disciplined there, with varying degrees of success, obviously. But sometimes spontaneity is more valuable than rigorous economy and sometimes it's about tone as much as meaning.
I think where it is useful to bear the pruning advice in mind is where you're trying to make a specific point. Well, in my own case, I know I'm often guilty of over-elaboration so it's excellent discipline personally to take a long hard look at what I've written and try and make it more readable.
That paragraph probably being a classic example of what not to do, but sometimes it's about the flow...
The great thing about having your own blog is that you can write how the bloody hell you like without some tosser from the Economist telling you what you can and can't say. If I want to stick three parenthetical remarks into one sentence, I'll do so. And if one of those parenthetical remarks is actually a whole paragraph, so be it. I don't care.
And I'm pretty sure R. Mortimer could have left the phrase "like a diamond" out of that sentence and let the reader imagine the analogy for him/herself. Clearly got carried away with his own cleverness there.
Oo, I seem to have gone all spiky again. Sorry.
Don't be, I rather enjoyed that.
Christ I'm sounding like a pompous arse myself today. Must be all the achingly dull meetings I've been having this morning.
What a brilliant find.
I've bookmarked it so I can dip in as the feeling takes me.
But I don't think it will stop me starting sentences with the word 'but'.
Ah that looks like some useful advice there. I always get annoyed when people say 'utilised' instead of 'use'. I mean, really.
It would be quite funny if someone started a blog which purposefully went against all the rules. Although I suppose it wouldn't be readable.
'When writing words, make sure you put the letters in the correct order.' Right, well that one can go immediately. treahr ikel isht.
I apologise if anyone used the word utilise above anywhere. Haha. But as far as I can see noone did. Ah who cares.
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